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Hey all, I decide to use a new style in mission 4, could you guys tell me how it looks? Does it look good to you? Anything you would like to see more from me? Blah, blah, blah, any comments are greatly appreciated!

Also, I've changed part 1, it is now consist of page 1 and page 2.

Oh, I have not work out my cameos yet. Once I decide what I want, I will make a cameo request~

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:iconmariethedragonwolf:
Your art is amazing~ no matter what style you do, it always is amazing :3 I wish i could draw like you XD btw, would you like to do an art trade or something .3.
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:iconhaychel:
*Haychel Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks and I could do art trade, but only after mission 4~ :)
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:iconmariethedragonwolf:
awesome! and that's cool, i'm fine with that. Still working on mission 4 myself~ do you wanna check it out? [link] it's not that great lol |D *shot*
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:iconhaychel:
*Haychel Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It looks alright given it is drawn with mouse.

You make me wonder though, that why aren't the dialogues consistently typed/written. Also, if you could tidy up the line arts a bit more, that would be a lot better for the readers! :) Colors are also cool, but you should tidy the line arts first before coloring, or else, it would be really hard to do~ :XD:
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:iconmariethedragonwolf:
[link] here's the fifth page if you haven't already seen it xD
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:iconmariethedragonwolf:
haha well actually the first page was, the rest was with my laptop which could be a tablet xD i'm thinking of drawing the line art and finishing the comic first and then coloring it in later.
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:iconhaychel:
*Haychel Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Still, it seems rather messy for me. I think you can do better with the line arts~ :la:
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:iconmariethedragonwolf:
lol yeah, i'll work on that XD wanna join me and some others on mibbit? :la:
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:iconhaychel:
*Haychel Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
too busy for that lol, working on coming pages~
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~Dragon-of-Twilight Nov 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love your art no matter what you do, but I think this new style fits better comic-wise? Maybe? Not sure what I'm saying, but it's good as always! :D Oh, and if you decide to use Stella at all in mission four, I'll probably do a written entry based on it c:
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