Also, I've changed part 1, it is now consist of page 1 and page 2.
Oh, I have not work out my cameos yet. Once I decide what I want, I will make a cameo request~
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You make me wonder though, that why aren't the dialogues consistently typed/written. Also, if you could tidy up the line arts a bit more, that would be a lot better for the readers!